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Passionate Ben Site Admin

Joined: 12 Aug 2006 Posts: 47
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:44 am Post subject: Trust in Love poem
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Trust in Love
Waiting for the words to flow
Out of my mind, through my lips
Never shall I let you go
Holding firmly to your hips
The one thing I crave most
The complexity of your trust
Searching for the machine's ghost
No anger, simply fears, and lust
Frustration looming in my heart
Honesty misconstrued for more
Once you helped tear them apart
The walls return, like once before
Longing for the new arrival
Deep gazes beyond the wall
Imminence for prolonged survival
A sanctuary for the fall
Do you feel me reaching out
To halt the re-construction
Never shall I scream or shout
Completing the obstruction
Displayed affection for all to see
Heart, mind and soul exposed
Facilitate your trust in me
We'll keep our love composed
I know it still remains inside
Orbital gazes seek confirmation
As my gaze, your trust collide
Eternal trust for life's duration _________________ Passionate Ben : )
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http://www.myspace.com/pecs29 _________________
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divasoul

Joined: 29 Aug 2006 Posts: 47
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:33 pm Post subject:
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Oh wow. I think this is my favorite line
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The one thing I crave most
The complexity of your trust |
_________________ How much good inside a day?
Depends how good you live 'em.
How much love inside a friend?
Depends how much you give 'em.
--Shel Silverstein _________________
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crimsonred
Joined: 22 Mar 2009 Posts: 2
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Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:53 pm Post subject: your eyes........
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in your eyes i see no lies
the truth my heart cannot disguise
through all the times that i have tried
the walls i have built no longer hide
the fear that i ride
propels me to a faster stride
to walk away from my mind
that no longer gives way, to hates design
and so i fall to the ground
and let out a lowly cry
as the pain runs up my spine
my self made illusions are shattered
and my thoughts are scattered
as your voice begins to matter
like the water fall, that begins to flood
your love makes every Levey undone
and here i am in your arms
a new born to what i have become
to the realization i succumb
listening to your heart beating like a drum
heres the answer in one sum
you and i are together as one............
well your poem gave me some inspiration to i guess kinda write from the other side of what you where saying,,,really off the top of my head,,and ive not written a rhyming poem in ages lol so hope you like,,,im done posting today....so thanks for the inspiration! _________________ #1 angel _________________
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